Walking in the clouds
way above where I stand
a ray of hope shining so bright
I wonder whats coming my way
I wonder whats causing the gleam
I wonder whats making me smile
I wonder whats bringing the sheen?
Blue sky and colors all bright
unspoken words and some otherwise
a moment let loose,the others stop by
I wonder what causes the spur
I wonder what rhymes this rhyme
I wonder where beginnings begin
I wonder what dreams look like
Loving the moments and holding them close
Some where deep in the closet of heart
a feeling that of a definite start
I wonder what is so different
I wonder what is it that makes me smile
I wonder why world seems such a better place
I wonder if it would last only a while!!!
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23 comments:
That's a beautiful poem.
I am so pleased to make your acquaintance.
Got a guitar? :)
You seem to be extremely happy!
What's the good news!? :)
ah!! lovely..
i loved ur use of "i wonder" great Richa
As usual, didnt understand anything except that you are sooo happy. I wonder .....
@Purekrystal:-Thank you so much and welocme to my blog:)
@Shaunak:-Yes!I do:)
@Varun:-Generally..a thought bubble..:)
@The Rat:-Thank you so much!!:)
@Vimuu:-lol..thats okies...isnt it?
I never get the Happy thought bubbles... only those of world dominationa and inter-dimensional cross overs.
But they seem to work really well for you. Sing along: If you happy and you know it... say hoorah! :D :D
@Aniket:-Sometimes one doesnt have a reason to feel the way he does...and same here..
this was a thought bubble..which was happy:)
but ofcourse i have no complaints:)
awesomely aweosme yaar...
too good... i had a sm ile while i was reading it..!!
@Rohit:-Thanks so much...:)
and welcome to my blog:)
where have you beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen???????????? :(
Rane(Kajal)
@Kajal:-Im right here babes...just got caught up with stuff:)
its great to see u here after so long..missed u on my blog:)
you wonder but there is a sense of the fear of losing it all :P
and where have you been haan?
@Ani:-i know i have disappeared...but got caught up in a lot of stuff..and i promise to be regular:)
Fantastic. Simply loved the ending :).
I too was off for a month. Feels great to catch up on such brilliant posts.
@Brown Phantom:-Thanks so much:)im glad u liked it!!!:)
"I wonder where beginnings begin"
So do I... beautiful poem here. Really loved it :)
@Brown Phantom:-thanks a ton:)and welcome back!
@Lena:Thanks a lot:) and welcome
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