Thursday, 10 September 2009

I wonder why!!

Walking in the clouds
way above where I stand
a ray of hope shining so bright
I wonder whats coming my way
I wonder whats causing the gleam
I wonder whats making me smile
I wonder whats bringing the sheen?

Blue sky and colors all bright
unspoken words and some otherwise
a moment let loose,the others stop by
I wonder what causes the spur
I wonder what rhymes this rhyme
I wonder where beginnings begin
I wonder what dreams look like

Loving the moments and holding them close
Some where deep in the closet of heart
a feeling that of a definite start
I wonder what is so different
I wonder what is it that makes me smile
I wonder why world seems such a better place
I wonder if it would last only a while!!!

23 comments:

Purekrystal said...

That's a beautiful poem.

I am so pleased to make your acquaintance.

Shaunak said...

Got a guitar? :)

Varun said...

You seem to be extremely happy!

What's the good news!? :)

The Rat... said...

ah!! lovely..

i loved ur use of "i wonder" great Richa

vimmuuu said...

As usual, didnt understand anything except that you are sooo happy. I wonder .....

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Purekrystal:-Thank you so much and welocme to my blog:)

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Shaunak:-Yes!I do:)

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Varun:-Generally..a thought bubble..:)

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@The Rat:-Thank you so much!!:)

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Vimuu:-lol..thats okies...isnt it?

Aniket said...

I never get the Happy thought bubbles... only those of world dominationa and inter-dimensional cross overs.

But they seem to work really well for you. Sing along: If you happy and you know it... say hoorah! :D :D

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Aniket:-Sometimes one doesnt have a reason to feel the way he does...and same here..
this was a thought bubble..which was happy:)
but ofcourse i have no complaints:)

Rohit Mishra said...

awesomely aweosme yaar...
too good... i had a sm ile while i was reading it..!!

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Rohit:-Thanks so much...:)
and welcome to my blog:)

Rane (The Orchid with All Shades Pink) said...

where have you beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen???????????? :(

Rane(Kajal)

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Kajal:-Im right here babes...just got caught up with stuff:)
its great to see u here after so long..missed u on my blog:)

ani_aset said...

you wonder but there is a sense of the fear of losing it all :P
and where have you been haan?

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Ani:-i know i have disappeared...but got caught up in a lot of stuff..and i promise to be regular:)

BrownPhantom said...

Fantastic. Simply loved the ending :).
I too was off for a month. Feels great to catch up on such brilliant posts.

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Brown Phantom:-Thanks so much:)im glad u liked it!!!:)

Lena said...

"I wonder where beginnings begin"
So do I... beautiful poem here. Really loved it :)

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Brown Phantom:-thanks a ton:)and welcome back!

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Lena:Thanks a lot:) and welcome