Tuesday, 31 March 2009

Just out of sight...

A conundrum of thoughts…a list of emotions,
The numbing of words, and senseless devotions.
Trembling, she wondered if she were right…
Was he gone forever…or just out of sight...

The last call…and words so few...
New threads of life…he wanted to renew…
Fearing, she wondered if she were right…
Was he gone forever…or just out of sight...

Torn and broken…Simmered and sighed…
Lived the monster…those sleepless nights...
He was gone… she knew it alright...
Hoping, she wondered if she were right…
Was he gone forever…or just out of sight…

Seething in pain,and waiting in vain..
Clutched those thoughts ….She waited through the night..
Waiting,she wondered if she were right…
Was he gone forever…or just out of sight...

Moments seemed a day… and Days passed on..
Waited by the sun…the moon shone on…
Reading to herself ,his letters promised of love..
Smiling, she wondered if she were right…
Was he gone forever…or just out of sight...

He went away…with a promise to return,
As she waited…for tides to turn…
Pressed along the tides of time,
Time moved on, as she stood still
Holding to her heart, never let the memories spill,
The wait went on till she couldn’t hold on
Dying , she wondered if she were right…
Was he gone forever…or just out of sight...

14 comments:

Urv said...

Aah.. Beautifull.. Loved the flow and the different phases.. Trembling, fearing, hoping, waiting, smiling, dying.. Mast ekdum :)

chirpy-paaro said...

woooowww....loved it...it was so beautiful!!! I hope writer's block has left and is just not out of sight!!!

Trinaa said...

aaaaaaaaaawww! SUPER!!! santa fanta..where was this hiding??? matlab..tooo good hai ji.. :o

*clap clap*

akashthematrix said...

So u won in this category too...
Shhhhhhhhheeeeeeeessssssh Mahn...I wanted 2 write a poem sorta thing 4 quite sometime...

N luk what u've done...U just came
up wid a beautiful creation...maan gay guru :)

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Urv:-Thank you:)...

@PAro:-I sure hope too...the block doesnt seem to leave me...:)...

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Trinaa:-Thank u:)kahi nahi hiding yaar...honestly speaking its just an outcome of a super boring meeting i was attending...just couldnt understand their gibberish,,,so penned down my own:P*wink..wink*

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Akash:-No winning buddy,,,just a random thought,,,im sure u can do it way better than me:)
to der kis baat ki....chalo likho!

Chronicwriter said...

i wanna cry now... u angry or sad?

you one poetess? never knew that part of that hiding in you...

when ever i think that being single is boring, i come and visit ur previous romantic post and then i immediately decide to get married

Nidhi said...

Am amazed by this one... It was simply beautiful :)

m kinda speechless right now.. may b shall b back to comment on it..

somehow your words have arose a storm inside me... i don't know how and why but a part of me can relate to it so much...

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Chriz:-Flattered by the compliment:)
thank you...and yes...now...'Find a Girl'!!!!
well,im neither angry...nor sad...
but this is a part of me that comes out once in a while..dont know why though..
Dont know if im a poetess...because i generally dont write poetry...poems coming out of me is a "once in a bluemoon" rarity:)

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Nidhi:-Thanks dahling:)im glad u liked it...:)....will wait for the comment:)

ARUNA said...

hi....simply beautiful....flowful....creative......very nice poem!!!

muthu said...

a hearty write.....

you do have quite a flow with words.....

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

@Aruna:-Thanks a lot:) n welcome to the blog:)

@Muthu:-Thanks a lot :)